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Friday, June 11, 2021

Flying 2

 As his wings spanned wide, he soared above. The king of the sky. That's what he felt like, until. 

A big shadow hit the big eagle out of the sky and into the water. Eagle was scared of going in the sky until he grabbed the courage to fly in the sky, when eagle went into the white fluffy clouds he saw a Condor flying in circles getting ready for his lunch. The eagle flew into the trees and hid inside a log. The conder flew into a bush, I was shocked by what happened so I checked in the bush but until. The conder jumped out at the eagle, poked the eagle's eye out and ate it, the eagle squawked and the eagle scratched the condor in the face with his talons. The condor and the eagle were fighting until they heard the biggest stomp, and they saw a Andean Condor in the trees. He was the king. The eagle and the condor stopped fighting because they were frightened of what was happening, the condor squawked at them and started to fly towards the eagle and the condor then took both of the condors eye out then took the eagles other eye and left the condor and the eagle blind. The eagle and condor were squawking until the most beautiful singing the birds ever heard, it was a phoenix coming out of the sky. The phoenix came to ground and helped the condor and the eagle to get their sight back. The clouds open as the phoenix flies in the sky, the loudest bang was heard after the phoenix left.

The end


5 comments:

  1. Kia ora Jack - nice mahi! What is a condor? I don't actually know ... I love the ending, tau ke.

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  3. hi jack l like your thing how long did it take you?

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  4. WOW Jack...you story started off being sad.I wasn't sure if I wanted to continue reading-but I did.
    I am glad that it ended happily.I hope the eagle and condor have learnt a listen.

    What do you think the eagle and condor could have done differently so the Phoenix didn't have to get involved?.

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