I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment. I am a Year 6 student and my teacher is Whaea Heather
Tuesday, September 28, 2021
The old greenhouse
One day there was A homeless boy whose name was Tyler looking for A good spot to sleep. Well, Tyler was looking for A home until he found an old greenhouse. Tyler didn’t know who the greenhouse belonged to until the next morning he woke up to someone trying to wake him up. Tyler woke up and saw two people were waiting for him outside. Tyler ran outside when he saw A little girl and A women. Tyler asked what they were doing here. Tyler was talking and found out that they owned the green house and they said “we used to garden here but we are going to bust it down for the homeless”. Tyler was confused and said “why would you bust down A beautiful greenhouse”.
They replied and said “because if we bust it down we get money then we send it to the homeless”. Tyler said as A joke and said “then give me money now”. They said no! Tyler was frightened by their anger, then ran off somewhere. Tyler ran into an alleyway and hid in A dumpster until midnight. Tyler went back to the greenhouse and thought it was gone, but it had tape covering the door. Tyler was fed up so he broke the tape then started to fall asleep then fell to the ground. Tyler woke up strapped into A chair to find out that he was captured by those two girls that he was talking to. Tyler waited for an hour until he saw someone walk in, Tyler was yelling at the person. The person Tyler was yelling at was A mafia leader. The mafia leader said “I'm busting down that greenhouse for me and my boys you got it”. Tyler was about to give up until he saw two guards walk in, one of the guards said “make your decision or we will bust it down now”. Tyler was guarded by the two guards then he got a glimpse of A pocket knife. Tyler had enough room to get the pocket knife out of the guy's pocket. Tyler got a hold of the knife and started the straps around him. Tyler was free but he waited until the guards left the room. Tyler was trying to plan his escape, well he was planning he saw A vent big enough for him to crawl.
Tyler saw the guards leave the room. As soon as the guards left Tyler climbed into the vent that led to the boss's office. Tyler was just above the boss’s office until he fell through the vent and fell. Tyler stood up and bolted for the door but when he did he slammed into the door. The door was locked and it was only Tyler and the mafia boss. Tyler was having a stare off with the boss, as they were having a stare off they both heard someone say “boss are you OK in there?”. The boss screamed and said “he’s in here!!”. Tyler opened the door and ran to the exit. The mafia boss and his guards were running after Tyler. Tyler got to the exit and ran outside and into the streets of Brooklyn. As Tyler was running he heard roars of engines, Tyler was almost caught so many times but got away. The whole of the mafia was going after Tyler. As the mafia was chasing Tyler, Tyler came up with an idea. Tylers idea was to lead the cars into a lake. Tyler was about to give up again but he had just remembered A sign saying “Prospect park lake”. Tyler was running until he saw the lake. Tyler wanted to run and make it look like there was more land in front of him. Tyler was doing his plan and it worked. Tyler was laughing at them. Tyler ran back to the greenhouse but lucky Tyler got there on time because he told the two girls about what happened. The two girls could not believe what had happened then Tyler told them to bust it down for the homeless. The end.